Starting with the description of the setting, I'm planning (as of right now) to have a few extras in order to sell the believability of this society. I picture the setting to be busy, but depending on how many actors I can get to film this, this detail is subject to change. After a minor description of the setting, Jane is introduced during a moment that takes place in the past/a moment that leads up to Eve getting interrogated. I want Jane's language to sound more formal in comparison to Eve in order to illustrate the control this society has over its people, as well as highlight the subtle differences in character between Eve and Jane. In terms of the actions displayed between both girls, I wanted Jane to be more restrictive and cautious, while Eve is more carefree and unaware. I wanted to demonstrate how both girls interact and respond with their environment, and how that impacts their relationship as the plot continues to unravel.
Tuesday, March 1, 2022
Short Film Script Part 2!
Starting with the description of the setting, I'm planning (as of right now) to have a few extras in order to sell the believability of this society. I picture the setting to be busy, but depending on how many actors I can get to film this, this detail is subject to change. After a minor description of the setting, Jane is introduced during a moment that takes place in the past/a moment that leads up to Eve getting interrogated. I want Jane's language to sound more formal in comparison to Eve in order to illustrate the control this society has over its people, as well as highlight the subtle differences in character between Eve and Jane. In terms of the actions displayed between both girls, I wanted Jane to be more restrictive and cautious, while Eve is more carefree and unaware. I wanted to demonstrate how both girls interact and respond with their environment, and how that impacts their relationship as the plot continues to unravel.
Friday, February 25, 2022
What's the Move??
Soooooo as of right now, I only have the beginning parts of the script, and I'm planning on what I want to do moving foward. This is my plan for the next week!
1. Finish the script!
2. Make edits if needed to the script (hopefully done by the middle of the week)
3. Storyboard my short film! After I finish with the script I'm hoping I can start entering the production phase of my short film :)
4. (ONLY IF I FINISH THE SCRIPT/STORYBOARD) Start looking for locations/actors
This schedule is meant to be flexible, but my goal is to get to item three by the end of next week!
I'll keep y'all posted!
Short Film Intro - What I Have of the Script so Far!
The relationship between Eve and the Interviewer is awkward and cold, as Eve feels that she is being lied to, while the Interviewer is not giving in to her curiosity. I wanted to establish this relationship in the beginning of the short film because I wanted the audience to not know who to side with, at least in the beginning of the film. However, I did want to establish the root of this relationship, which is the different perceptions of reality. The Interviewer, unlike Eve, doesn't question the surveillence, because they see that as normal, and they see Eve's view as absurd. Meanwhile, Eve find the Interviewer, like everyone else around her, as fake personas, and like she said, she can no longer decipher what is real, even the conversation occuring right in front of her with the Interviewer.
How does this remain in the conventions of the pyschological thriller?
The suspensful component of a psychological thriller is prevelant within this beginning scene, as the audience is unaware of who Eve is referring to when she says "them", and they are unaware of how the interrogation became to be in the first place. The audience is left to wonder if what the Interviewer said about her "insighting violence" was true, and whether she is or is not imagining things. As for the emotional component, Eve is questioning not only her reality, but herself as well, and whether what she is sees and feels is real. Those around her, such as the Interviewer, doubt her beliefs and her feelings, thus making her second guess them, which there is a hint of in this scene.
Gotta keep writing!!
I still have more of the plot to write, and I'm hoping by the middle of the next week I can have the script finished.
That's all for now! :p
Wednesday, February 23, 2022
Meet the Characters!
Hey y'all!
I wanted to present the three characters in my short film that will have primary roles/focus. I wanted to highlight different aspects of their personality, and how they interact with one another.
1. Main Character/Protagonist: Eve
When choosing the name for the character, I found that the name "Eve" was derived from Hebrew, and it meant "to live". I thought the meaning perfectly fit the character because Eve's surroundings and enviornment she is emersed in is entirely fake, and all she wants to do is live authentically. Therefore, this has led Eve to become curious and observant, particularly about her enviornment and how she can escape the world she is trapped in. Due to this curiosity, she is also stubborn, as she wants the answer to everything and anything, hoping that the answers to her questions gives her clarity. In this case, she wants to know why she and everyone around her is being watched, and if those watching her can stop, and if they won't stop, why? Eve is also reserved, but out of a want for privacy and space, not by nature. As her frustration with being watched becomes heightened, she becomes less reserved and more open about how she is feeling.
Eve's curiosity is often used against her by others, especially the Interviewer because they don't want her to uncover the truth, so often times Eve second guesses herself, which leads her to feel isolated from others and disconnected from her enviornment.
Eve's relationship with Jane is the closest to "real" that she can get, yet unlike Eve, Jane is afraid of uncovering the truth because she is comfortable in the lie she is engulfed in. Hence, she lives in that lie willingly, and is fine with being watched. Due to this, their relationship does strain, and causes some indifference. As for Jane and the Interviewer, they have no relationship, instead both are curious about each other, as each are trying to uncover their own version of the truth. Their interactions are simply cold and they lack any connection.
| When planning out what characters I wanted to have in my short film, I decided to jot down characteristics that came to mind for each one. |
Tuesday, February 22, 2022
Writing a Psychological Thriller: Screenwriting Research
Before I start my script, I want to ensure that I have the main components of a psychological thriller down so that I am staying true to the genre. Based off prior research (Genre Research), I know that psychological thrillers must include suspense and emotional connections via the protagonist, but I want to gather more research as to how I can strengthen those elements and make them clear throughout the piece.
Below I am highlighting the main objectives I found throughout my research, and how I want to incoorporate them into my piece.
Rule #1: Perspective
In order to engulf the audience into the story being told, I found through my research that it is important to have the story told through the perspective the main character/protagonist. Once the protagonist is identified, it is important to exploit the emotions that they are feeling, or more specifically, have them portray emotions that the audience can identify with and relate to, such as guilt, fear, anxiety, sadness, joy, etc. In regards to my short film, I know I want to main character to feel frustrated and angry with their surroundings, since they are tired of being watched and no longer want to be monitored for their every move. I want to focus on their frustration, but throughout different scenes, explore how that frustration was first reached, perhaps stemming from fear or anxiety of the situation.
By focusing on that emotion or select few emotions, it is crucial that I tie them with a flaw that my character poses, which in this case, the flaw is my main character's observative nature. No one in this film wants them to be obersavtional or curious, and the fact that they are is what gets them into trouble.
Rule #2: Illustrate the Perspective
One of the examples mentioned while I was doing research was Macbeth and how one of the characters, Lady Macbeth, constantly washes her hands due to her increasing guilt. Actions, tied with dialogue, allow for the character's feelings and perspective to become more clear to the audience. In other psychological thrillers, a prop I've noticed that is constantly used to represent a character's inner feelings has been a mirror, such as in The Machnist and Spencer. I recently watched Spencer one weekend and I noticed alongside the usage of a mirror to illustrate Diana's feelings, cinematography was also used to demonstrate how Diana felt anxious and highly caustrophobic in the environment she was forced to be in. By using continous close-up shots to follow Diana, her anxiety and insecurities became more prevelant and unfortunetly, relatable, Despite being a biopic, the film wasn't really about her life, but rather how she felt, and I want to capture the same idea in my short film. On the surface, my short film is about the main character being constantly watched and followed in a society where entertainment is valued more than reality, but I also want to tie in the emotions of the main character, and have the plot be driven by their perspective.
Rule #3: Locate the Problems of the Plot/Character
Even though the problems of the main character take place in their head, where those problems stem from also need to be presented. According to my research, someone, such as the antagonist, or something has to be causing the problem for the main character, and because of their interference, the internal conflicts of the protagonist are able to occur. In my short film, those watching the protagonist, as well as those compliant with the rules established in this society are causing the main charracter to feel isolated and frustrated with the circumstances they are in. I found one short film on YouTube called Windblown, and the problem stems from the fact that Beth, the main character, lost her brother. Thus, as she experience's grief, she begins to visualize him as if he were real. Through the visualizations, we are able to see how she processes grief, and how she is unable to separate reality from fiction. Hence, her grief (emotion) stems from her brother's death (problem).
I also found that it is important to make the audience care about the main character, but the catch with my short film is that the audience is actually who my protagonist is upset with, since they "keep watching", so how do I make my audience care? My idea was to lead the audience on, make them think that those interrogating the main character (they are never shown on screen) are the villans, and then lead to a "plot twist" where the audience's active participation is revealed.
Next Steps?
Now that I've gathered key pointers on how to write a pyschological thriller, I'm hoping to get started on the script and figure out a set of of characters. As of right now, I only have the protagonist and the interviewer, but I haven't given them names yet. Therefore, I'm hoping to establish the characters, and get started on writing the opening for the short film!
Sources I used for research:
Sunday, February 20, 2022
Schedule for the Week!!
Hey y'all it's Soph!
I'm writing out a schedule of what I plan on blogging + researching for the week!
I plan on doing the first two bullets throughout the week, as I hope to have a rough draft of the script by the end of the week. As for the last two bullets, I will probably get to those by the end of the week, so that while I'm writing the script/researching tips for how to write it, I can adjust based on further research that I find.
-Screenwriting tips for psychological thriller/starting the introduction of my film
-Figuring out a plot (probably an outline/rough draft of the story)
-Finding examples of other psychological thrillers for reference/comparison
-I'm hoping that I can draw inspiration to better my film :)
-Genre conventions in terms of the production process
Saturday, February 19, 2022
Piecing the Puzzle Together - Worldbuilding
Originally, I mentioned how I wanted to finalize the plot of my short film (A Work in Progress: Short Film Concept), however, I realized that my story has many moving parts, including an entire dystopic society that I have to establish, especially since the setting plays a major role in the progression of the main character. Therefore, I now want to focus my research on writing this story, and how exactly I can worldbuild effectively while unraveling my plot.
Where and When Does My Short Film Take Place?
I want the world to replicate modern times, yet there is a sense of eerieness to it. In order to provide that weirdness, I want to have the characters dress with a retro/vintage aesthetic, yet be surrounded by modern items, buildings, technology, etc. Despite the modern surroundings of the characters, the retro feel to their clothing, way of interacting with each other, etc., is what makes their society strange and uncomfortable. I wanted to create a false sense of perfection through this aesthetic, so that the main character is easier to spot, since they will dress slightly more normal (representative of current styles) and act more modern than those around them. Therefore, the short film takes place during the modern era, but the inhabitants of this society dress vintage/tweed in order to present a dramatic idea of perfection/simplicity (kinda of like they were trapped in a bubble).
Below are examples of how the people inhabiting this world would dress:
Finding the Right Match - Picking a Genre!
In my last blog post, (A Work in Progress: Short Film Concept) I elaborated on the concept I wanted my short film to focus on, but I was having trouble deciding on what genre I felt best fit the idea. After going through a list of possible movie genres , I found that "psychological thriller" best represented my short film, and here's why:
Overview: What is Thriller and How Does it Coorlate?
I decided to start my genre research by first defining thriller, and the overall characteristics this genre has before diving into the psychological sub-genre. The main takeaway from a thriller is that it always has an emotional purpose, and should always emit a feeling of suspense. With my short film, I felt that the suspense could be found in the unraveling of "who" exactly is watching the main character as they are being interrogated, and if they eventually escape the cameras. I also felt that the suspenseful aspects of the short film matched the main character themselves, as according to my research, the protagonist should be individualistic and isolated from the forces or people they once trusted. In this case, the main character of my short film is learning to not trust who's watching them, as well as the people forcing them to behave in front of the cameras. My protagonist questions the lifestyle posed to them, and thus their need for escape and attention to the reality of their situation makes their actions suspensful and engaging.
| hehe pun intended :) |
Along with suspense, thrillers also contain a variety of specific tropes, such as plot twists, paranoia, cliffhangers, unreliable narrators, etc. In reference to my short film, I felt that some of these thriller characteristics matched my concept, especially the use of plot-twists and cliffhangers. The plot-twist that would occur in my film is the discovery of "who" is watching, which would be the audience themselves. Throughout the film, it would be unclear that the characters are referencing the literal audience, but as the fourth-wall breaks become more consistant and clear, that message will start to unravel. As for the cliffhanger, the ending of my short film will have the main character tell the audience to "keep watching", and the film will abruptly end. Meanwhile, the audience will be left to wonder what happens after the main character reveals this.
Why Psychological?
When looking at the main themes of a psychological thriller, the characteristc that struck me the most was the perception of reality. In psychological thrillers, reality is explored as an idea, and the characters are put in positions or scenerios where they have to determine the truth within their narrative. I found this to be similar to a postmodernist concept we learned in class called "absolute truth", as it too explores alternative truths and how they are perceived. In my short film, the main character knows that the reality they live in is fabricated, but sold to viewers as the truth. Knowing this, the main character wants to dismantle the alternative truth and highlight reality, yet there are forces trying to stop this.
While the environment the main character is placed in is dystopic, thus giving the short film dystopic traits, the story isn't focused on the society itself, but rather the main character's attempt to break from this society and bring attention to what's "behind the curtain", so to speak. The setting itself is only pushing the development of the main character foward, and aiding in telling their version of the story. Hence, my main focus is to highlight the emotional response of the main character to their surroundings, rather than the functionings of the society.
In order to portray the story and narrative of the main character, I plan on using specific film characteristics of the psychological thriller, such as flashbacks. Throughout the short film, two "timelines" will be taking place, the interrogation/interview, and then the main character's life within the society they are in. The second sequence of events (the MC's life within the society) will include the bulk of the story, and explain why they are being interrogated/what led them to their breaking point (the interrogation). Hence, the flashbacks will be moments leading up to the interrogation, and present the full perspective of the main character.
| Notes of Research Pt. 1 |
| Notes of Research Pt. 2 |
The Sites I Used for Research
Friday, February 18, 2022
A Work in Progress: Short Film Concept
| The notes I took while coming up with this concept. It's a rough draft of what I want the plot to look like, but this is subject to change. |
Tuesday, February 8, 2022
Reflection: Brand Identity Project
Hey y'all its Soph!
In my A level class, one of our first projects of the year centered around creating a brand for ourselves, and how we wanted to advertise ourselves to others. While doing this project, I had to reflect on myself as a person, and what my main goals were when I communicated and greeted others.
Aesthetic
One of my main concerns for my presentation was how it looked, especially since I wanted the project to match how I present myself on the outside. I decided to go with cool toned colors, such as blue and purple, in order to portray a relaxed, yet energetic vibe. Specifically with seeming energetic, I blended the cool toned colors with funky wallpapers, mainly retro spaced themed because not only is that my personal favorite aesthetic, but I thought it would compensate well with the color scheme I have created. However, I noticed that when I received my feedback after the presentation, that combination of color and style didn't clearly establish my brand, instead it made myself seem more vauge and complicated, thus not allowing people to get a clear sense of who I am.
Communication of my Brand
The image above is the logo I created for myself. I have a moon placed in the center because it symbolizes my love for the night time, as well as the space aesthetic I was trying to recreate. The surrounding colors are mainly purple and blue, once again reiterating the relaxed vibe I wanted people to gather from my presentation. "Est. 2003" represents the year I was born, and "Sophy" is the nickname used to refer to me by most people. ^^Click this link to view my brand identity video and the presentation |
Monday, February 7, 2022
Reflection: Film Distribution Project
Hey y'all it's Soph! It's been awhile since I posted on here but I'm back! In this post, I wanted to share a project I recently did in class, and reflect on what my group I did well, and what we could have done better :)
What Was the Project?
For the film distribution project, we collaborated with the creative writing class and were assigned to turn one of their stories into a teaser/trailer for a potential film, as well as outline a plan for how we would distribute the film to audiences.
The story that my group and I selected was titled Rot, and it follows the story of two characters, played by Cristian Velazquez and Olivia Wagner, who are trapped within an isolated junkyard as one tries to escape, while the other tries to kill for survival. Throughout this murder chase, the two characters are both longing to escape the junkyard, which drives them further to insanity and fear.
Choosing the Story/Pre-Production Process
After our group was given a small list of stories to chose from, we decided to go with Rot because of its eerie concept, and we were intrigued with the setting of the potential film, which was in an abandon junkyard. Our group was interested in taking on the challenge in re-creating the location and filming at night, as it would allow us to play with lighting and hopefully present the empty and frightning atmosphere of a junkyard. When planning for how we would film the teaser and the trailer, our toughest challenge was deciding on a location, as it was difficult to coordinate our schedules and meet in an area that was nearby. Originally, we were going to shoot behind a plaza where there was a mini, empty parking lot and a dumpster, but we decided not to go with that option since it location was too small, and it wouldn't be enough space to portray what is meant to be a void of darkness. Therefore, I showed my group members an area in my neighborhood that was more open, and had areas surrounding the space that resembled parts of a junkyard, such as electric boxes. We decided to settle for this location since it was easier to meet with each other there, as well as meet with the actors that took part in our project.
Filming Pros and Cons
Once we selected the location, we knew we wanted both the teaser and the trailer to present an eerie and isolated atmosphere, hence figuring out how we wanted to portray that became another challenge. Rot only contains two characters, so we had to be strategic and careful in how we presented their time on screen, as well as their relation to each other. Hence, the teaser starts off with Cristian's character alone, as he is engulfed by darkness and little to no resources, only his lighter. We felt that by gradually closing in on him, we would bring the audience closer and closer into his secluded bubble, thus allowing them to feel isolated with along with the character. Additionally, we felt that emphasizing the lighter Cristian is holding, it would create intrigue as to how he got a hold of it, how that is his only resource, and who is alongside him in the junkyard, since the lighter was mysteriously thrown back at him.
Since the teaser creates suspicion as to how Cristian's character landed in the junkyard and who is the mysterious person with him, we had the trailer purposefully give away two main questions of the teaser. The trailer not only presented the mystery person to be Olivia's character, but we also provided the audience context as to what each of the character's motives were, and how that adds to the premise of the film. In regards to filming the trailer itself, we found it difficult to stay on track with the storyboard we outlined earlier in class, as the dialogue we originally wanted to incorporate didn't properly outline the plot of the film, hence we had to rework the scenes we initally planned during filming, which unfortunetly ran our time behind. However, we were pleased with the final result of the scenes we did change, because it provided clearer context to the story we were trying to tell.
| A scene taken from the teaser in which Olivia's character threatens Cristian's character. |
Both the teaser and the trailer were filmed at night, so lighting was definietly a major obstacle. On the two days we filmed the teaser and the trailer, we used three different types of lights, which included a bright flashlight, our cellphone lights, and a tiny blue light used for darker/intimate moments, such as the close on Cristian during the teaser in which he looks out to see who returned the lighter to him. While some shots could have been lit better, we felt that we were successful in keeping out external shadows from our shots, such as shadows projected from our own bodies, or of the actors that weren't on screen.
Post-Production
Our group decided to edit together and edit both the teaser and the trailer. While Paola and Andres worked on the trailer, I worked on the teaser. I wanted each shot to be focused on for about 3-5 seconds, so that as the subject comes closer into the view, the audience is constantly wondering who the person is, and why they are by themselves. Since the shots we had were dimmer than we expected, I had to brighten them up during post-production using the color correction features provided by Adobe Premiere. While editing, I also noticed that the audio provided by the original clips distracted from the action being presented, so I decided to find nature sounds from YouTube in order to insinuate the isolation felt by Cristian's character and how he is mainly by himself, or at least he thought he was.
| Image of editing the teaser (to the right is the color correcting system I used to brighten up the shots shown in the teaser). |
Since our film is apart of the horror/thriller genre, we wanted to distribute with companies such as A24 and Neon, since both companies are known to distribute independent films, and A24 is known specifically for its horror projects, while Neon specifically targets low-budget films such as ours. While we outlined the reasons for distributing with them, we did lack detail in how we would market the film, and how the marketing would in turn effect the way we distribute. What my group could have done differently is delved into more extensive research, and compare our distribution plan to previous plans that worked for successful projects. One group in our class highlighted this, and I felt that it clearly demonstrated their plan, and we could have incoorperated this research as well. What worked well with our plan is how we wanted to reach our target audience, as we wanted to do initally do a limited release of the film in order to test its engagement with people before we wide release it. If it were to be unsuccessful, we decided we would release the film on demand, so that people still have the option to watch the film and we would still earn revenue from it, even if it wasn't as successful as we hoped it would be.
Link to the Full Project (includes teaser and trailer!)
May I Present...Keep Watching!
The journey of making Keep Watching has come to an end! Below are the links the short film, social media page, and the postcard. Keep Watc...